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Learning English through Drama
You just watched a drama which aimed at arguing teenagers to stay away from drugs. However, you feel that the drama was not up to standard and you learned nothing from it. Write a letter to the drama group manager stating any aspects which you thought were below standard. Sing your name "Chris Wong".

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Dear manager,
I am writing to complain a disappointing drama show, held by your drama group last week, which was far from satisfaction and there was nothing i can learn from it. Three big mistakes you drama group had made and i will have a comprehensive investigation with you in the following. I hope that you will be alerted from it.
For one thing, audiences were barely easy to understand the theme of staying away from drugs. Doubtless, a best drama or story should concisely represent the messengers of the theme from commencement to the end. Lamentably, you failed ! Your drama team divided the drama into two parts, the first part included some drugs' disadvantages but few, the second part, worse still, was totally a love story which was fully not related to your theme-"stay away from drugs". I adopted a wait- and -see attitude to your group and hoped that they could turn the show to a right trail. However, there was still no sign to deter teenagers from being addicted to the drugs until the end of the drama.
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On the top of this, the quality of your actors were also far from to be desired. A good actor is supposed to rehearse many times before the real show, your group, however, had told the audiences "i didn't through their poor performance. Not only did the female protagonist perform poorly in the restaurant scene of the second part, the male protagonist was also a disaster! To be honest, i could not feel any actor's skill from them and their performance were just like a stone!
Additionally, one of the problems is the costumes of your actors. Wearing suitable costumes is also a basic requirement for a sublime drama show, but you group failed failed failed!. Why did some ancient clothing exist in the drama when your group settled it in modern epoch? Especially in the market scene of first part, all the temporary actors behind the protagonists were wearing in ancient costumes. Was it a scientific show? i was so confused and what was going on? I hope that your group can put more toil in costumes next time and don't make a same mistake again.
Theme, actors and costumes are also a crucial prerequisite of a good show. You should consider them as the most importance.

Yours faithfully
SIGNATURE
Chris Wong
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樓上貼得唔好

Dear manager,

I am writing to complain a disappointing drama show, held by your drama group last week, which was far from satisfaction and there was nothing i can learn from it. Three big mistakes you drama group had made and i will have a comprehensive investigation with you in the following. I hope that you will be alerted from it.

For one thing, audiences were barely easy to understand the theme of staying away from drugs. Doubtless, a best drama or story should concisely represent the messengers of the theme from commencement to the end. Lamentably, you failed ! Your drama team divided the drama into two parts, the first part included some drugs' disadvantages but few, the second part, worse still, was totally a love story which was fully not related to your theme-"stay away from drugs". I adopted a wait- and -see attitude to your group and hoped that they could turn the show to a right trail. However, there was still no sign to deter teenagers from being addicted to the drugs until the end of the drama.
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On the top of this, the quality of your actors were also far from to be desired. A good actor is supposed to rehearse many times before the real show, your group, however, had told the audiences "i didn't through their poor performance. Not only did the female protagonist perform poorly in the restaurant scene of the second part, the male protagonist was also a disaster! To be honest, i could not feel any actor's skill from them and their performance were just like a stone!

Additionally, one of the problems is the costumes of your actors. Wearing suitable costumes is also a basic requirement for a sublime drama show, but you group failed failed failed!. Why did some ancient clothing exist in the drama when your group settled it in modern epoch? Especially in the market scene of first part, all the temporary actors behind the protagonists were wearing in ancient costumes. Was it a scientific show? i was so confused and what was going on? I hope that your group can put more toil in costumes next time and don't make a same mistake again.

Theme, actors and costumes are also a crucial prerequisite of a good show. You should consider them as the most importance.

Yours faithfully
SIGNATURE
Chris Wong
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ArianaGrande 1652日
先唔理grammar同錯字
我覺得你太直接
或者可以用中性d既字眼
唔好一黎就far from satisfactory
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浪塵 1652日
SING YOUR NAME ?
金榜題名時 1652日
好耐冇見你,幫推。
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On the top of this, the quality of your actors were also far from to be desired. A good actor is supposed to rehearse many times before the real show, your group, however, had told the audiences "i didn't through their poor performance. Not only did the female protagonist perform poorly in the restaurant scene of the second part, the male protagonist was also a disaster! To be honest, i could not feel any actor's skill from them and their performance were just like a stone!

Additionally, one of the problems is the costumes of your actors. Wearing suitable costumes is also a basic requirement for a sublime drama show, but you group failed failed failed!. Why did some ancient clothing exist in the drama when your group settled it in modern epoch? Especially in the market scene of first part, all the temporary actors behind the protagonists were wearing in ancient costumes. Was it a scientific show? i was so confused and what was going on? I hope that your group can put more toil in costumes next time and don't make a same mistake again.

Theme, actors and costumes are also a crucial prerequisite of a good show. You should consider them as the most importance.

Yours faithfully
SIGNATURE
Chris Wong

幾生動, 加分
snowerk 1652日
呢種題目係要你睇開藝術評論先掌握到,係咁fail,fail,fail考官只會當搞笑文章咁睇。但問題係題才唔係learning english through humour。

[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/BsQAfxd.png[/IMG]
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呢種題目係要你睇開藝術評論先掌握到,係咁fail,fail,fail考官只會當搞笑文章咁睇。但問題係題才唔係learning english through humour。

[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/BsQAfxd.png[/IMG]

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呢種題目係要你睇開藝術評論先掌握到,係咁fail,fail,fail考官只會當搞笑文章咁睇。但問題係題才唔係learning english through humour。 http://i.imgur.com/BsQAfxd.png[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/BsQAfxd.png[/IMG]

錯grammar錯到笑
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呢種題目係要你睇開藝術評論先掌握到,係咁fail,fail,fail考官只會當搞笑文章咁睇。但問題係題才唔係learning english through humour。

http://i.imgur.com/BsQAfxd.png[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/BsQAfxd.png[/IMG]

錯grammar錯到笑

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不如你算啦 作黎作去都係咁, 一味隨心又冇料到
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